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[HardBass Unleashed(WIP)Updated]

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First off, this n***a below me is using words that he probably doesn't understand (such as counter-melody) The only problem with this is you add some of the sound effects at very weird intervals. Like at 00:21, it would sound less out of place if you had placed it a bar later.

Some things that clarify what the n****r below me is trying to say:

-Don't bother doing anything else with bass, there's already enough.
-A pad or some strings wouldn't hurt. If you add a pad, make sure it's on the same chord as the lead's melody so it doesn't sound off-key.
-Turn down the lead's volume a little bit.

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[Elements (Orginal Song)]

Decent.

Sounds like you got the idea for that arp in the beginning from that nonstop2k remix song. In fact I'd be suprised if that wasn't what it was based off. That's all I really have to say.

TerraNation responds:

nje maybe, had this sort of intro awile ago, but not a big deal thougth, This version is anyway noncopyrighted version this more like producer version. Other is more well worked i been putting alot hard work on it. thanks droping by /TN

[Tinkering]

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This is alright. I'm not sure how it's house though, I don't hear a drop of house in it at all. I don't really like the strings in the beginning, coupled with the beat that started out good, but the snare started going all over the place, and the you made the kick go four to the floor for some reason..Turn down the hats some, or at least reduce their mids..and turn that sub bass down, alot. At 1:04 and beyond it's waayyy too loud. 2:05 and past needs a lot of work. The beat has no flow and I don't dig the notes at all. Normally I'm not this critical but I was looking through your reviews, and well, yeah.

InvisibleObserver responds:

Its not house, but its not anything on the list really. I felt like not hitting Misc for once.

Yes I come across as a hard ass in most of my reviews, gets people answers. :P

I agree with you on nearly everything you said, drums all over the place, this is relatively tame.

Thanks for the good review!

[NEWS (WIP)]

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Just think, you're only 16.. keep this up and you'll be BALLIN in 2 years time. Uh, anyways, your song. Breaks are really creative and they don't get boring, albeit the song is only 1 minute 49 sec long. Make it longer. That's the only suggestion I have. In my last review I said your mastering was spot-on and you replied that it actually could've used some work. I meant that on a non-professional, newgrounds level. From a professional standpoint, you're right, that song 'could' have used some mastering work.. same is true for this one. Maybe boost the mids some.

dats all

poopr1221 responds:

Thanks for the review. I need to learn up a little more on Mixing/EQing and the like. I will take the mids into account in the finalized version for sure. Thanks for the tips.

[_.-| Martyr |-._]

Great

Very minimal, but excellent nonetheless. Those who wake up with good melodies in their head, seemingly fathomed subconsciously over night, are those who are born with musical genius.

Wolftacular responds:

I know, it's very simple, and I usually develop, but I just felt like leaving it that way :P

And I hope what you're saying is true, 'cause it's not the first time it happens XP

[~EnV~ Destination (Demo Clip)]

cool

Nice song. I know what you're trying to do at :08. Make that quite buzz louder and put stereo enhancer on it and increase the stereo separation. The main lead peaks too high at some points because the upper mid freq's are a bit high.

[First Rondez-Vous]

cool stuff mang

This is wonderful :D

Piano work is beautiful. My only complaint is the overpowering sub bass on the kick drum.

[240 (FINAL)]

yes

A real headsplitter you've made. Frantic beats chopped to perfection, and the mastering is spot on. A gem in my book.

lol @ 1:19, quite creative.

poopr1221 responds:

Thanks for the review man. Glad you liked it. Wasn't expecting a compliment on the mastering. I actually think there's room for improvement as far as mixing and EQing goes. Again, thanks for the review.

[Doin the Acid Stomp(Timmy]

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I don't know much about psy trance, so uh.. here goes. I really like the melody you did with the gated saw. The clicky kick matches psy I guess. Maybe lower the levels on the lead, bass, and those echo-y hi hats. That's all.

good work :)