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Dig the intro. Drums came in very smoothly.. oh I love this chord progression alot. Hmm. This is missing vocals.. yeah that's what it's needs.. someone needs to spit some lines over this. That would be sick if you could get someone to do that. Here's my suggestions:
-It ended rather abruptly.
-Guitar introduction could use some work. I see what you were going for though. Would be sweet if you could get a real guitar on this.
-Mastering could use some work. The kick is kind of ducking out the other sounds.
Nice job man, just fix those kinks. Very cool ambient / hip hop thing you got here. Pretty impressive for trying something new! Keep at it bro