Rawrthaas's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elements (Orginal Song)]

Decent.

Sounds like you got the idea for that arp in the beginning from that nonstop2k remix song. In fact I'd be suprised if that wasn't what it was based off. That's all I really have to say.

TerraNation responds:

nje maybe, had this sort of intro awile ago, but not a big deal thougth, This version is anyway noncopyrighted version this more like producer version. Other is more well worked i been putting alot hard work on it. thanks droping by /TN

[Tinkering]

blrlrgrgr

This is alright. I'm not sure how it's house though, I don't hear a drop of house in it at all. I don't really like the strings in the beginning, coupled with the beat that started out good, but the snare started going all over the place, and the you made the kick go four to the floor for some reason..Turn down the hats some, or at least reduce their mids..and turn that sub bass down, alot. At 1:04 and beyond it's waayyy too loud. 2:05 and past needs a lot of work. The beat has no flow and I don't dig the notes at all. Normally I'm not this critical but I was looking through your reviews, and well, yeah.

InvisibleObserver responds:

Its not house, but its not anything on the list really. I felt like not hitting Misc for once.

Yes I come across as a hard ass in most of my reviews, gets people answers. :P

I agree with you on nearly everything you said, drums all over the place, this is relatively tame.

Thanks for the good review!

[NEWS (WIP)]

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oh my gosdfgfdfgsfsgg

Just think, you're only 16.. keep this up and you'll be BALLIN in 2 years time. Uh, anyways, your song. Breaks are really creative and they don't get boring, albeit the song is only 1 minute 49 sec long. Make it longer. That's the only suggestion I have. In my last review I said your mastering was spot-on and you replied that it actually could've used some work. I meant that on a non-professional, newgrounds level. From a professional standpoint, you're right, that song 'could' have used some mastering work.. same is true for this one. Maybe boost the mids some.

dats all

poopr1221 responds:

Thanks for the review. I need to learn up a little more on Mixing/EQing and the like. I will take the mids into account in the finalized version for sure. Thanks for the tips.

[_.-| Martyr |-._]

Great

Very minimal, but excellent nonetheless. Those who wake up with good melodies in their head, seemingly fathomed subconsciously over night, are those who are born with musical genius.

Wolftacular responds:

I know, it's very simple, and I usually develop, but I just felt like leaving it that way :P

And I hope what you're saying is true, 'cause it's not the first time it happens XP

[240 (FINAL)]

yes

A real headsplitter you've made. Frantic beats chopped to perfection, and the mastering is spot on. A gem in my book.

lol @ 1:19, quite creative.

poopr1221 responds:

Thanks for the review man. Glad you liked it. Wasn't expecting a compliment on the mastering. I actually think there's room for improvement as far as mixing and EQing goes. Again, thanks for the review.

[Pi-L Driver]

cool

Good job. Nice melody, everything sounds good except for maybe the snare which blends in a little too much with the lead at some parts near the end. Sorry that somebody zero'd it before anyone even voted fairly on it >_< I managed to bring it up to a 4.10 though :D

spoonybrad responds:

Thanks, mate. I'm still trying to figure out how to keep the crunchy drum sound prevalent, but not overpowering. :)

[Crying Soul [DJO Remix]]

great

You did a fine job with the sidechaining for the most part. Drums are good and get the job done. Great job with the transitions. Only a couple things to work on here.. Rip the bass a bit more. It sounds a bit bland. The sidechaining is alright but that's something that improves with time and practice.

Good job :D

DJOrsa responds:

Awesome, thanks man. I'm about to go check out your new stuff! I'm exicted, haha.

[Techno Alay]

hmm

I'm going to dodge an actual review.. I just wanted to ask, did you play a game called Hoverboard ASDF like 5 years ago?

NatB responds:

No. What was it? Thanks for the 7/10. Nathan

[DJO - Stars]

yar

Melodies are good, and the overall structure of the song is great.

You have a great handle on melodies.. if you keep going you might end up big someday ;p

DJOrsa responds:

Thanks man! When you release new tracks PM me or something, I love listening to your stuff, especially your hands up songs. :D