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[Rise of the Machines {Loop}]

Hmm...

In the beginning, it sounded like that crazy frog :S. It would be perfect for a robot-type flash! Lacks a main melody, but I'm thinking if it had one, it would ruin the robot-destroying-a-city feel it has!

itsameyayo responds:

True, which is also why I'm changing the song around, to make sure it doesn't stop, but keeps flowing. Peace!

-SuperDrummer146

[X Phantom {2:59}]

Hmmm

Oi, meant to give you an 8 in the Nova review!

Sorry man :D

This one is better imo

Sorry for the short review but it's 2 am here :\

xXNovaXx responds:

Lol, thanks
Doent matter about the 8 :D

LATAR
-xXNovaXx-

[{NOVA} [1:57]]

Good!

That eerie chopped background really helped set the mood for the strings that were soon to come.

Later the strings sound like they were off scale, FL Studio 6 gives an scale auto-detecter which really helps.

It also sounds like you could use more samples hehe.

Sounds like I'm being a critic, but this isn't half-bad :)

xXNovaXx responds:

The strings arnt of beat, its the reverb-echo, but i didnt think of that so thanks for pointing it out

LATAR
-xXNovaXx-

[Red_Bak(bass_mix)]

hmm.

Hey. This is pretty cool. Some of the notes are off beat though, it kind of throws you off.

The melody is cool, and the nice fast bpm is cool ;)

There is a lot of variation to the melodies and the synths change quite a bit. I can't really say if that's a good or bad thing.

Overall, this is pretty cool.

wiselinden responds:

I can't seem to find what you mean about the off notes.
but Thanks for that.

[Raver (D@B Edit)]

what the.

The main synth distortion is very annoying! Turn that damn thing off!

This song would sound so much nicer without it!

I think a pad should be in here, and some louder bass wouldn't hurt!

It's a nice melody, but that disgusting distortion ruined the entire song :P

notaclock5902 responds:

yea, u rly need good speakers to appreciate this one, and no it would suck rly, rly, bad without the synth, and the whole idea was to make the synth the lead and the bass just the bakside synth

[Closer To God]

Ok.

Hi.

The guitar and bass is nice, but it lacks drums. This would be very nice if there were drums :P.
If you could imagine drums in here, this could easily be a very good song :)

Nice work on the guitar nonetheless!

JimmyDreak responds:

ty, and i had othe drums in there, but it really took away the feeling from this song. ive been workin on finding other elements to add to this one.

[emptyness chorus]

:o

Doing dishes gives inspiritation. I just saw you posted somewhere on the forums

and I was like 'hey i'll check out some of this guys work.'

And so I did. It's pretty short and the vocals are limited. So I'm assuming this is a loop.

I'm not really fond of this type of music, but this one is pretty ok.

...

For a loop it's great work.

mhb responds:

thank you. i'll check some of your audio out.

[*-sAw-*]

Great.

Hi, Ever_Dream. Listening to the track as I review. The clap sounds a bit out place. The melody is nice and little dark :o. Sounds a tad empty with just the synth drums and bass. Now I hear a pad. Maybe that's been there, lawl. The reverse hit sounded cool. There really isn't anything that shone brightly here, but overall it was good :)

Please check out my work!

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Mid-Night responds:

hai

[Dubness]

Good work.

A good, professional sounding loop. Very trancing and gives me a warm feeling in my gut :>.

Like a nice sunset on a tropical beach.

No flaws :)

Good work, and I'm suprised I got the first review.

First!

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Maoish responds:

Thanks, bud :)

[F1uk3 - Fiesta]

Good job.

Hey, Fluk3. I'm still putting together that remix lol.

Anyways, grats on the gold, man :).
This one doesn't fail to impress anyone who liked Dedication. The drums however were extremely spontaneous. I almost fell out of my seat of shock when they came. Maybe a reverse crash would help. The main synth could use a touch up, like reverb or something.

The quiet strings were a great touch.

Good work, Fluk3
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P.S- Check out some of my stuff. I need reviews!

F1uk3 responds:

Thanks for the review. You know I was actually already thinking (before I uploaded the song) that a reverb effect might add to its flavor.

Not QUITE sure what you meant by spontaneous drums. Hrm...

Anyway, thanks for your comments.