Rawrthaas's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dreamerz: Fading Into Time]

Potential!

You're getting very good SuperDrummer. A nice ambient piece, and the mood is really set. It just lacks something. I don't know if a beat would help or not.

Anyways, this is probably going to be my final review on the audio portal.

Good work, Superdrummer. You will be one of the best artists here at Newgrounds sooner or later.. I can tell :)

Bye.

<R>

itsameyayo responds:

You're--you're...you're leaving?!?!

= O

; (

Or just not reviewing anymore?

Well, I know you are going to be great as well, you've really got a freakin' lot of talent.

Lacks something? Hmm...not sure really. Maybe a slow DnB beat, I'm not sure.

\m/_SuperDrummer146_\m/

[Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall]

Hm.

Super, you really have to get new synths, its what makes your music shine :D

Anyways, it was a nice, tense track. That teapot whistle was cool, as well as the sirens.

It had a robot domination feel throughout the entire song, which is what you were aiming for, right? :D

Good stuff :>

Now if you would, check out my latest stuff ( they seemed to have been zero'ed -.- )

itsameyayo responds:

YAY! ROBOT DOMINATION!!!

-And yes, the sound fx rock the house : )

-And yes, I'll go check your stuff out : )

-SuperDrummer146

[DJ Zendai - Time to Jump]

Hrm.

Well. This definitely has excellent mastering. Great mastery, and good use of reversed sounds :P
Nice slight dist on the kick :D Melody is more on the happy side, the drums do kinda get boring after a while. A lot of parts were however quite empty. This is good stuff, but it cries for a lot more. Pad perhaps? Arped synth? Whatever you think would make it sound cooler :>

4/5

I am however unable to download the song though :S

I get this error

Error - no entry exists in the database with the id you've specified. Please go back and try again.

I would like you to review my latest song, Illuminatus.

Bye bye, yy :o

Yytrium responds:

Well this song was awaiting approval. Maybe that is what caused the error. I will look onto that. Thank you so much for reviewing this. I made this song a while ago, so I'm not sure if I'm gonna change it. I might though because you are right about the empty parts. The kick needs more variation too but I just can't be arsed at the moment. I will look onto reviewing some of your stuff too! Thanks! :)

[DJ Comet-Bloodbath]

Hmm..

Listening to as I review here...

Okay...These drums are wicked. I can hear an organ type thing and it sounds slightly off scale or detuned...or something off. But I can see you were aiming for this. Great bass, imo.
Best thing here is the drums imo. I like them :)

If this were to be put into a flash, I can see it going into a chaotic scene of some sort.

Good work!

Now review my latest song, hehe :D

[Each Step]

A shining example of Trance

Excellent synths. The melody creates a very dreamy atmosphere. I enjoyed the beat too.

That piano was superb, very realistic. Excellent diversity, always changing, but not enough to be a mess ;)

nightvision responds:

Thanks alot. I like to hear what I need to improve on, but I equally enjoy positive feedback!

[DJ Comet-Crowd Combat]

Hmm...

Well, when the drums came in, it almost blew my speakers! Now I understand, aiming for a loud and prominent drums is a positive, but you should turn them down just a little, so everything else in the song wouldn't be shadowed out.

The drum loop was a good one though!

TheComet responds:

if I turn down the drums you lose alot of that power you need in a breakbeat drumline, I've already tried it.

[Rise of the Machines {Loop}]

Hmm...

In the beginning, it sounded like that crazy frog :S. It would be perfect for a robot-type flash! Lacks a main melody, but I'm thinking if it had one, it would ruin the robot-destroying-a-city feel it has!

itsameyayo responds:

True, which is also why I'm changing the song around, to make sure it doesn't stop, but keeps flowing. Peace!

-SuperDrummer146

[Question Mark]

sssss

Oh yes...

Definitely puzzle solving music!

Pretty short. Definitely for fast puzzles.

Fairly simple song, I'm not sure if a main synth would help, since it might move that puzzle solving it posseses!

4/5

[i2 - Burst]

Hmm

Hello, i2.

I too have some songs that I've given up on. :o

This is I can say had a lot of potential, the main synth was nice and slidey, somewhat sad (mood-wise) The drums were nice and loud, but they were loud to the point that something else needed to back it up, not sure what, something that would make it sound not so empty...Thats for the 1st section.

The second part...The snare should have a little more thump to it, I liked the kick. It was more full, not as lacking as the first section.

Doesn't seem like I'm liking the song so much, as it may look so far in my review, and I kinda expect more from you, but I liked it, and I understand that it's not 100% complete, and therefore I'll rate you on how much was done before you quit on this one.

A nice, somewhat sad melody, with good drums.

Mind telling me is your piano the built in one from FL or some other one?

5/5

Gawd I haven't made a review this long in a while...

Vote on some of my new stuff will ya? 1 of them was zeroed :(

[X Phantom {2:59}]

Hmmm

Oi, meant to give you an 8 in the Nova review!

Sorry man :D

This one is better imo

Sorry for the short review but it's 2 am here :\

xXNovaXx responds:

Lol, thanks
Doent matter about the 8 :D

LATAR
-xXNovaXx-