Rawrthaas's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mercy -Faint-]

You asked for review. So here it is.

The intro was nice. When that synth blasted in at 00:41, it was too loud :(

The hats are very nice. IMO, there is too much empty space between 00:41 and 02:17.

Overall, it's a nice piece. The things that need improvement are

The equalizing

Less 'empty space'

MercyClock responds:

You know what you're talking about ,friend.=)
Thanks for the tips ,I'll be sure to check them when I'm mixing again.

Thank you for the review.

Regards, Mercyclock.

[Egyptian HardStyle -*Tripzter*]

awwright

Holy crap. The melody resemblance to one of my songs [Scarab.. go check it out!] is uncanny.

Anyways, this is a banging tune. I think it's great.. go finish it! Other than my song, it also has a nice resemblance to a Headhunterz style thing, and I like them :D

It's a nice demo. Get to the full version :D

[Vain Star]

yup!

I don't know much about Industrial. So I'm going to try as little as possible to BS this.

Does it sound good? Yes. Uncluttered, and well arranged? Yes. Good equalizing? Mmhmm.

cycerin responds:

Mmhmm, mmhmm. Thank you.

[Atomic Inc - Ashika]

Hrmm

It's okay :)

It's EQ'd very well. The melody is nice, but it's kind of.. hum .. It kind of makes this sound more like some J-Core style thing instead of Happy Hardcore.. Very SharpnelSound-esque.

[B0UNC3 - 7:30 Previews]

New B0unc3 stuff!

You're one of my fav NG people :D then again you probably have earned that title from A LOT of people here! Anyways, a nice collection of all sorts of things. What's impressive is that if in an alternate dimension where all these were completed into full songs, they'd each be really good.

Personally, I think #2 is best. And the VG title for #5 is Wizards and Warriors.

Interesting to hear some of these.

B0UNC3 responds:

Ahh! Thanks haha. Ye hehe, but I'm pretty good at throwing away flp's and then realizing I wanted to finish them :/

[[TMM43]Weekend Has Come]

hrmm

That drop at 00:11 was very off-tempo, and the song could have done better without it. The drop at 01:24 was too loud as well :(.. Ah well, bad drops aside, who cares! This is a nice, classic sounding hardcore tune!

Great job :D

[Operation: Evolution]

Ugh.

It was okay, but when are you going to get new samples or synths.. instead of using that out-of-the-box stuff. I mean.. seriously.

And that guitar was WAY too loud at :52.

To be fair though, it sounds like a lot more effort was put into this than any of your other songs.

[Evil-Dog - Asshole!]

holy crap it's evil-dog

AWWWRIGHT

When I came to NG like way back in 2004 or so, I used to love listening to your stuff all the time :D This one doesn't dissapoint

GREAT JOB!!1

Evil-Dog responds:

haha nice :) glad to see I live up to the name through the years
Cheers man

ps: hey you got tons of cool music too! keep it up my friend! :)

[-{EP}- Desert Raider [DEMO]]

Hrmm..

It's got a nice exotic sound :D. Hmmm... At 00:39, the snares are too loud.

It's nice, but I think something is missing. I can't put my finger on what though.

ErikPaladin responds:

I'll try to find that missing stuff. Thanks for the review \o/

[SysRq-Existing/Breathing]

Hrrmm..

This is pretty chill.. The pad really helps to create a dreamy-sort of atmosphere. The spacey bells really compliment the pad too. It's a nice melody. Then at 00:48 that noise/glitch sound. I like it :D

When the drums came in, I was like "HOLY CRAP!" this sounds just like this song I made a long time ago! (I think it was called Eve of tranquility 3 or something.)

Mmm.. That juno-saw style synth is great.

Nice melodies! Great work.

SysRq00 responds:

I swear to GOD I never heard it before. =O

Haha.

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I'm a sucker for white noise. I've been using it in pretty much all of my music, I just think it's the perfect balance between glitchiness and rhythm.