Rawrthaas's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[W] Shock lead [Demo]]

Argh!

Don't listen to the guy below me. Who cares if it's not in the genre YOU think it should be in? There is no HARDSTYLE genre to submit to on newgrounds, so you have to submit it to the next closest thing. The melody is definitely in the trance-ish key anyways. Also, lol@metalcore.

Anyways, it's pretty nice. The kick lacks depth, and it drowns out the synth. In many hardstyle songs, the kick also provides bass, but here it doesn't. So some bass would do this good. Just fix the minor equalizing problems, and maybe add something.

weemeee responds:

:) :D XD Ty for the review :) ill upload the full version soon =]

[[TMM43] Spring Trance]

spriiiing

I liked the melody too. It's really dreamy. I didn't like the main synth so much, though. The arp was a little too distracting as well. Bass was a bit drowned out amongst all the other sounds. That's it for criticism. This is a really nice piece. Good melody, and it all flows together very nicely.

[[TMM43] Eurodancer]

lol

i see you actually got around to making this

I'm pretty tired of Eurodancer now. Listened to it hundreds of times while I was trying to remix it, and had listened to it millions of times prior to that.

But anyways, neat vocal thing in the beginning. At around 01:37 or so, the snare just cuts off from the drum loop, and it sounded out of place.

gj

[Save Me (Fruity Lopez Remix)]

Yeaaaa

I love all your stuff. You're really good :D

Nice transitions, and nice pluck-ish synth at around 00:50

Pro EQing.. good work all around.

btw, I thought the bass was fine in the beginning.

Pyroific responds:

Thanks! :D its actually the first song i've mastered. so yeah. :P

And about the bass in the beginning maybe its my headphones?

Thanks for reviewing!

["Drown" - F-777]

ok...

There was way too much random stuff. Like at 00:35 there's a snare hit and it just came out of the blue. Shortly after there's some vocal thing or something, it didn't fit either. The saw was pretty boring too, since I've heard too many times (it's a preset...) The bass was nice.

imo you put too much unnecessary stuff in it that didn't help the song at all.

3/5, but +1 since you said it was one of your bests, so 4/5.

F-777 responds:

The saw is a preset yes but it is edited. Also i made this 6 months ago =S.

Im sorry you didn't like the song.

[[TMM43]Where is the Rock?]

=0 lol fdsgfjmbjnmlkfghfghjsdf

I don't know anything about house. So I'm going to keep this short and bull-crap free:

It's nice

[Trippicrunched Christmas]

ya!

Excellent melodies, nice drums. At 01:10 or so sounds like there is a note off or something. After that part, for a bit it sounded like I was listening to an artist named Hrvatski. Good stuff!

Ah, a break down. Into some christmas songs. Very nice.

Alright, it's near the end, and the resemblance to Hrvatski is again, uncanny (with the glitchy melodies and 8bit-ness and all.)

This is my favorite song by you. Keep up the good work =)

itsameyayo responds:

Thanks! I must look into this Hrvatski composer, he must be good :)

-Merry Christmas as well!

-ImperfectDisciple

[[TMM43] Vortex]

aye

There's some vocal or something at :10. It was toooo loud :(

man, you love dropkicks. The melody sounds familiar. You should add like another break or something in the middle, because right now it's pretty much a continuous run of the same thing over and over. If you get by those things, this is good :D

["In Imagination" F-777 ReMiX]

ehh

Try doing something with z3t4+ presets so they don't stand out so clearly as... presets >.>. The four to the floor was nothing special, but then again they never really are. It's nice for a 2 minute thing.

7/10 and 5/5 because I hate zero voters.

F-777 responds:

I did use z3ta...and the presets are edited...

Thanks for the review though!

[Leave]

Merry christmas

It's a relaxing and chill track. It flows very well. You didn't go overboard on anything, everything fits like pieces to a puzzle. At 01:07 and 01:11 it sounds like there's an off key note.. I think I can tell what you were trying to aim for, but I don't think it was pulled off very well. But who cares about that, this is an excellent piece. Great job!

Edirol Orchestra is a very good VST that sounds like it would work wonders for this piece.