You asked for review. So here it is.
The intro was nice. When that synth blasted in at 00:41, it was too loud :(
The hats are very nice. IMO, there is too much empty space between 00:41 and 02:17.
Overall, it's a nice piece. The things that need improvement are
The equalizing
Less 'empty space'
You know what you're talking about ,friend.=)
Thanks for the tips ,I'll be sure to check them when I'm mixing again.
Thank you for the review.
Regards, Mercyclock.
yup!
I don't know much about Industrial. So I'm going to try as little as possible to BS this.
Does it sound good? Yes. Uncluttered, and well arranged? Yes. Good equalizing? Mmhmm.
Mmhmm, mmhmm. Thank you.
New B0unc3 stuff!
You're one of my fav NG people :D then again you probably have earned that title from A LOT of people here! Anyways, a nice collection of all sorts of things. What's impressive is that if in an alternate dimension where all these were completed into full songs, they'd each be really good.
Personally, I think #2 is best. And the VG title for #5 is Wizards and Warriors.
Interesting to hear some of these.
Ahh! Thanks haha. Ye hehe, but I'm pretty good at throwing away flp's and then realizing I wanted to finish them :/
holy crap it's evil-dog
AWWWRIGHT
When I came to NG like way back in 2004 or so, I used to love listening to your stuff all the time :D This one doesn't dissapoint
GREAT JOB!!1
haha nice :) glad to see I live up to the name through the years
Cheers man
ps: hey you got tons of cool music too! keep it up my friend! :)
Hrmm..
It's got a nice exotic sound :D. Hmmm... At 00:39, the snares are too loud.
It's nice, but I think something is missing. I can't put my finger on what though.
I'll try to find that missing stuff. Thanks for the review \o/
Hrrmm..
This is pretty chill.. The pad really helps to create a dreamy-sort of atmosphere. The spacey bells really compliment the pad too. It's a nice melody. Then at 00:48 that noise/glitch sound. I like it :D
When the drums came in, I was like "HOLY CRAP!" this sounds just like this song I made a long time ago! (I think it was called Eve of tranquility 3 or something.)
Mmm.. That juno-saw style synth is great.
Nice melodies! Great work.
I swear to GOD I never heard it before. =O
Haha.
Thanks for the review! Yeah, I'm a sucker for white noise. I've been using it in pretty much all of my music, I just think it's the perfect balance between glitchiness and rhythm.
lol
Listening to how another person interprets my audio and then tries to emulate it.. it's kinda neat :D
The drums remind me of your own style, and I can hear how you tried to emulate the way I do melodies and.. yeh.
Maybe I should do a Quarl-style track :P
lol. yeah. It's always a lot of fun to try and take on some one elses style. You never really get it, but that never means that what comes out isn't any good. ;)
A++
I'll play this outside my house as a Halloween track when the time comes.
It's even better than those tracks you find on the Halloween CDs at Party City. Mostly because those tracks have those lame, unnecessary and cheesy sound effects (like the goofy laughing). This track however is not cheesy, nor is it lame.
It creates a feeling of dread and evil. Ace stuff.
Haha, yes! That's what my other friends have been saying, lol, funny that you would say that :)
-Very creepy, have fun playing it outside your house! It'll fricken' rock :D
-ImperfectDisciple
:o.... :O!
Ooh!
Unh!
Hmm.. the snare is pretty weak. Uh.. YAH! It's a great tune. That e-pianoish thing in the beginning sounded somewhat out of place. A little (just a little). When that kick came in, it was kind of a surprise. I was thinking that if the kick filtered in, rather than came in at normal volume it would be cooler :D
its kool tho srsly (see what I did there with the k instead of c)
good!
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